The Alchemist Essay/Julius Caesar

The Alchemist Essay:

My ideas throughout the Alchemist Essay show some good couldn't but I could have been more creative and more in depth with my writing. For being able to go more in depth, I could have had clearer examples so the viewer/reader could understand what I was processing about the book. In my writing it has some pretty good organization to it but I easily did well with keeping the paragraph's in correct order like a time line of the story. I could have been clearer on my explanations from the quotes, and reasoning's so I could be better organized throughout the writing. Between my Alchemist, and my Julius Caesar Essay I did worse than at the beginning of the year, because I couldn't finish my Julius Caesar Essay in time so it brought my whole grade down.

Julius Caesar Essay:

My ideas and conclusions throughout the Julius Caesar Essay showed average creativeness, but they were very simple and short. For me to be more successful in the future with showing my ideas, I can provide better and clearer evidence & time to write/think through everything. My writing is a good order and good presentation, but I lack all of the information I need. For example I got through the first two paragraphs but I didn't have time to do the third so I did the conslusion. I could do better on budgetting my time so I could finish everything, and try to follow the rubrics well and efficiently. Between my Alchemist Essay, and my Julius Caesar I did worse than at the beginnning of the year, because I couldn't finish my Julius Caesar Essay in time so it brought my whole grade down.

The Lost Boys

Throughout the Migration to America, the Sudanese have had many issues and problems with the diversity of America. The Lost Boys have been moving and travelling all across the States so they jobs, education, and a new start. One boy named Peter has moved to Kansas for education, and a better job. Peter struggles through making friends, doing sports, and evolving around their way of religion. For example when Peter had a church group together, he was having trouble connecting with them and god. With the way they worshipped him. While he sat thinking, he thought of how Sudan and his people think of supporting god and the way they sing to him. Peter was speechless with what some of America's thought, actions and religious views. He learned and taught himself how to understand and cope with all of these suprising actions. Peter began to make friends and join groups, or teams which helped him understand more thoroughly than before.

I didn't know how to do the URL thing so here are some:

http://www.genocidintervention.net/areas_of_concern/darfur/what_ginet_is_doing

http://www.refintl.org/where-we-work/africa/sudan

http://alertnet.org/db/an_art/55866/2010/02/9-145631-1.htm

The Lost Boys

Throughout the Migration to America, the Sudanese have had many issues and problems with the diversity of America. The Lost Boys have been moving and travelling all across the States so they jobs, education, and a new start. One boy named Peter has moved to Kansas for education, and a better job. Peter struggles through making friends, doing sports, and evolving around their way of religion. For example when Peter had a church group together, he was having trouble connecting with them and god. With the way they worshipped him. While he sat thinking, he thought of how Sudan and his people think of supporting god and the way they sing to him. Peter was speechless with what some of America's thought, actions and religious views. He learned and taught himself how to understand and cope with all of these suprising actions. Peter began to make friends and join groups, or teams which helped him understand more thoroughly than before.

I didn't know how to do the URL thing so here are some:
http://www.genocidintervention.net/areas_of_concern/darfur/what_ginet_is_doing
http://www.refintl.org/where-we-work/africa/sudan
http://alertnet.org/db/an_art/55866/2010/02/9-145631-1.htm